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Post by mfwilkie on Dec 3, 2008 8:31:49 GMT -5
Fingers Probe
I.
"I lit candles at all the altars; let go of August’s lowest murmur, and now an empty seashell hums and the sea is laughing.
It is not just you I lost but the world.
II.
Again today I turn a page of the sea.
The water is golden under the bridges; its current bringing along the seasons. The past goes on falling.
What must I do to single out myself?
Shatter the night and rip up the day to overwhelm this silence between the life I dreamed and the changing dream I live.?
Only this?
III
Night drains from the moon and I hear the enormous roar of the surf, the essential thread on which my existence is strung, and all the stolen years without you drift by, sea-woven with desires pure and bitter. I touch this emptiness once and will not sleep again, forever."
* A Cento drawn from The Vintage Book of Contemporary World Poetry edited by J.D. McClatchy
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Post by Jonathan Morey Weiss-Namaste47 on Dec 3, 2008 9:55:22 GMT -5
Nice flow Maggie. What is the source of the cento?
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Post by Jo Lynn Ehnes on Dec 3, 2008 15:13:27 GMT -5
I love that Maggie. I love doing centos but I think so few truly appreciate them the way they should, they see it as stealing and not any work, damn they are hard. LOL I love this one and yes who is the source.
I wrote one last week using Mike's works. I should send it to you, I know you'd like it. He has such a wonderful voice, much like this one above.
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Post by Ron Wallace (Scotshawk) on Dec 4, 2008 16:42:10 GMT -5
Excellent!!! I too wonder at the source. There were times it struck a familiar chord, but I never could place it. Ron
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Post by mfwilkie on Dec 4, 2008 17:27:40 GMT -5
Damn, I forgot to copy the title. Sorry guys.
I used The Vintage Book of Contemporary World Poetry edited by J.D. McClatchy
Mags
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Post by Jo Lynn Ehnes on Dec 4, 2008 17:34:35 GMT -5
I will take your advice, Mags, will try to get to find one this weekend, or perhaps I should peruse one of the old EP anthologies and see what my eyes can catch in those.
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Post by Tina (Firefly) on Dec 7, 2008 15:45:17 GMT -5
Forgive me, Magpie, but is this your cento or one from the book you mention? I didnt quite understand. No matter, it's one of the lovliest pieces I've read in a very long time. III in particular, just made me melt into it's beauty: Night drains from the moon.....
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Post by mfwilkie on Dec 7, 2008 16:30:49 GMT -5
It's my cento, Tina; its lines and phrases come from seperate works in the anthology.
I think I left a link to the cento's early history in Jo Lynn's draft drawn from Michael's work.
Maggie
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