A Pacman for Your Arteries/Pts I & II

[mfwilkie]

Go to a window,
any window facing east.

Bring your quiet—
and bring true eyes
to hear the dawn—

You'll need them both
to bless your bitters.


II


I didn't expect to find
a rise of fire burning
beyond the trees, didn't
expect it to shut down
all senses save one—

this throat-tight longing.

[Jo Lynn Ehnes]

Think I'm having a hard time wrapping my mind around the title and what follows. Like the verse, think I'd leave out the and, I like the sound of those two brings and since you have the hypen don't think you need the and. Explain that title to me.

[mfwilkie]

The third piece should tie the title to the poem, JL. Or I'll change it. ;D

Will be posting the second one in a mo.

Later, gator.

Mags

[Jo Lynn Ehnes]

Patiently awaiting the third, like what you have so far and understand the arteries but that Pacman, hmm....

[mfwilkie]

chew-chew-chew-

Just read your poem.

Will be back in a bit- Have store issues.