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Post by mfwilkie on Dec 21, 2008 0:58:58 GMT -5
The birds have gone elsewhere.
And in another room, lilies survive
in a window pane.
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Post by Jonathan Morey Weiss-Namaste47 on Dec 21, 2008 14:29:15 GMT -5
I like the contrasting imagery and emotion in this terse, panoramic tidbit..........
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Post by mfwilkie on Dec 22, 2008 11:32:20 GMT -5
Thank you, jon.
Have a wonderful Christmas, my friend.
Mags
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Post by alfredo on Dec 23, 2008 17:42:40 GMT -5
Plenty to dwell on here - evokes a certain peace from
from such a few words..."less is more "
But may I yet
I suggest one word less?
Elsewhere
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Post by ramadevi on Dec 27, 2008 9:03:29 GMT -5
I like just how Jon described this. EXACtly!
I think elsewhere should stay there and not go 'elsewhere' LOL
I LOVE the brevity here...the imagery. The title too.
Bravo.
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