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Post by dmtimney on Mar 11, 2009 0:33:15 GMT -5
The need to suffer, torture the question, chain circumstance to the wall, and batter out a useless confession has passed like the first sun blind with resolution that stumbling, spilled out the stars then mistaking the gift for misfortune receded in disgrace to the farthest corner of the sky.
How it is I came to sit at the window of this plank house sunk to sill in larch and snow, resolved to rest at odd angles on its seasoned hearths lacks importance as though I had never been to where I was, and what was is nothing more than a small fly, a minor nuisance to a persistent present where all matters have in their end fallen together and nothing is an accident.
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Post by Jonathan Morey Weiss-Namaste47 on Mar 11, 2009 16:31:26 GMT -5
Nicely written, Donna. This required several reads, and I think I'm getting on the right track...........Best wishes.
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Post by mfwilkie on Mar 12, 2009 22:57:53 GMT -5
Oh, kiddo, I really like this!
Going back for seconds!!
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Post by mfwilkie on Mar 12, 2009 23:06:31 GMT -5
'...sunk to sill in larch and stone' Wonderful phrase, mi amiga!!
Donna,
This is terrific!
Going back for thirds.
Mag
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storyweaver
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Post by storyweaver on Mar 12, 2009 23:36:04 GMT -5
Ah, Fate, acceptance, awareness how gently they come together when we stop beating them with why's and how's...VERY NICE!
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