I told Alice I'd write a dirty poem./Revision

[mfwilkie]

I Told Alice I'd Write A Dirty Poem

Two glass stems of Mexican sin
and the pony-tailed image
she painted of him as "handsome
enough to wreck your dreams
in his cowboy boots and jeans"
and I'm all over the definition
of horniness.






Original Draft

Two margharitas of Mexican sin
and the pony-tailed image
she painted of "handsome enough
to wreck your dreams
in his cowboy boots and jeans"
and I'm all over the definition
of horniness.

Tomorrow, I'm buying a dog.
and taking him to Senor, the Vet.

[David Nelson Bradsher]

What's the Spanish word for strumpet?

Nice, Mags, but I'm not sure you need the add-on for this poem. It's a volta in a poem that doesn't need one.

[mfwilkie]

Thanks, mon petit chou.

All those nits this morning were glaring at me.


Mags

[Jo Lynn Ehnes]

smiling, that's a good one? You still down south? Drop me a note or three, LOL Got tons to tell you sometime!!! Met myself a journalist and I think I'm in love!!!

[Marion Poirier]

Maggie, I love the title and the poem -
expecting something different - wry humor -
BUT - it must be me, nobody else has a problem -
smart people - I may be reading too much into
the last line and a half or too little.
Maybe that's the point. Take it how you want to.

M