Ron Buck (halfshell)
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Post by Ron Buck (halfshell) on Jun 5, 2009 18:33:53 GMT -5
Punch with Judy .
O how they take (archival rivals) to pluck and play hi-ho-up-and-giddy-up
with the early arrivals; talk shop, name drops topped with allegory sop
(shear peasant denials)
all the live-long-day.
They cleave-cleave unnecessary parts, upending earnest cartography spinning from the heart.
But w(h)ee! who play announce the day before they rise to (suck a cup)
(a)wake.[/size]
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Post by alfredo on Jun 9, 2009 15:30:04 GMT -5
I really like this but confess there are many gaps in my understanding. I need your help with the meaning here and there I believe the central theme is deception and hypocrisy …is this the case? And why “wee”
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Ron Buck (halfshell)
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Post by Ron Buck (halfshell) on Jun 9, 2009 21:42:30 GMT -5
Alfred:
first of all you picked up on a typo omission! Thanx, What I was thinking and what I typed were two different animals.... and second is yes on your thematic observation but with the brite comeback of creative spirit as the kicker. Better to be bad and playful than to never have played at all.
tidings ron
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