Post by ramadevi on Jun 6, 2009 5:50:21 GMT -5
Second revision
Humanity is rushing toward a place
in evolution's present history
that pivots on awareness we must race
to alter our direction drastically.
Division, hatred, selfishness breed war,
neglecting our innate inter-connection;
but when we tune to sacred inner core
we orchestrate a score of truth's perfection.
Our differences dissolve when we extol
the goal of understanding and acceptance,
so hearts aflame with love can gain control
and celebrate our co-interdependence.
Until our global family unifies,
the changing weather heralds our demise!
Revision
Humanity is rushing toward a place
in evolution's present history
that pivots on awareness we must race
to alter our direction drastic'ly.
Division, hatred, selfishness breed war,
neglecting our innate inter-connection;
but when we tune to sacred inner core
we orchestrate a score of truth's perfection.
Our diff’rences dissolve when we extol
the goal of understanding and acceptance,
so hearts aflame with love can gain control
and celebrate our co-interdependence.
Our global family must unify
before the weather-changes make us die!
Original
Humanity is rushing toward a place
in evolution's present history
that pivots on awareness we must race
to alter our direction drastic'ly.
To quell the tides of hatred feeding war,
let's notice that all life shares deep connection,
and resonate in sacred inner core
an orchestrated score of truth's perfection.
When all the world will selfless love extol
and aim its goal to higher aspirations,
then hearts aflame with light will gain control
and fuel the world with holy inspirations.
Our global family must unify
before the weather-changes make us die!
* Rough first draft.
All suggestions welcome.
Is it too preachy? Too generalized?
Is this line awkward?
When all the world will selfless love extol
When we extol the joy of love-petrol (alternative)
When all the world flow with love-petrol (another alternative)
Humanity is rushing toward a place
in evolution's present history
that pivots on awareness we must race
to alter our direction drastically.
Division, hatred, selfishness breed war,
neglecting our innate inter-connection;
but when we tune to sacred inner core
we orchestrate a score of truth's perfection.
Our differences dissolve when we extol
the goal of understanding and acceptance,
so hearts aflame with love can gain control
and celebrate our co-interdependence.
Until our global family unifies,
the changing weather heralds our demise!
Revision
Humanity is rushing toward a place
in evolution's present history
that pivots on awareness we must race
to alter our direction drastic'ly.
Division, hatred, selfishness breed war,
neglecting our innate inter-connection;
but when we tune to sacred inner core
we orchestrate a score of truth's perfection.
Our diff’rences dissolve when we extol
the goal of understanding and acceptance,
so hearts aflame with love can gain control
and celebrate our co-interdependence.
Our global family must unify
before the weather-changes make us die!
Original
Humanity is rushing toward a place
in evolution's present history
that pivots on awareness we must race
to alter our direction drastic'ly.
To quell the tides of hatred feeding war,
let's notice that all life shares deep connection,
and resonate in sacred inner core
an orchestrated score of truth's perfection.
When all the world will selfless love extol
and aim its goal to higher aspirations,
then hearts aflame with light will gain control
and fuel the world with holy inspirations.
Our global family must unify
before the weather-changes make us die!
* Rough first draft.
All suggestions welcome.
Is it too preachy? Too generalized?
Is this line awkward?
When all the world will selfless love extol
When we extol the joy of love-petrol (alternative)
When all the world flow with love-petrol (another alternative)
