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Post by Jay Gandhi (engineering poet!) on Jun 7, 2009 12:54:12 GMT -5
Where is the kid?
In a closet tucked deep down inside Behind the jealousy, beneath the ambition, Under the pain, besides the hatred- There resides a naïve young kid.
In the race to earn the larger bread, Speeding past the ethics, overtaking the family, Sweating the health, burning the content- Somewhere lost is a naïve young kid.
After chasing the horizon 3/4th of life Failing to buy a house, cribbing over recession, Abusing the boss, fighting with every human- A quest begins to find a naïve young kid.
Irony of losing sleep to try gain peace, Is that when I realize, to be a kid again, and Fly a kite with a street-kid, my grandson says, “My grandpa is like a naïve young kid!”
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Post by Angel Clementine on Jun 7, 2009 13:41:17 GMT -5
The feeling of struggle is well perceived by this reader; you may want to check in stanza 4, line 1 to see if you had missed a word during your typing (..."to" gain...). Thank you for sharing your words with us. *Angel*
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