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Post by wavemaker9 (Rick D.) on Mar 6, 2008 1:21:22 GMT -5
Impulsive passion,
forgoing fashion’s
fickle embrace,
set into motion
trickling love notions
pickling to place purpose
to the surface tension
it traces to you.
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Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Mar 6, 2008 7:34:56 GMT -5
Not one wasted word, Rick. I like.
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Smitten
Mar 6, 2008 15:51:04 GMT -5
Post by MichaelFirewalker on Mar 6, 2008 15:51:04 GMT -5
I like it too-----it succinctly describes the struggles one can have when trying to reach across multiple barriers of difference in a desperate attempt to attain lost union with a significant other...I like the image of foregoing fashion's embrace, ie., who care about looking cool at a time like that, when it's really intense and really matters, and the poem's voice is trying to understand what is keeping them apart, ie., what is the cause of the surface tension?
michael
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Smitten
Mar 6, 2008 16:05:45 GMT -5
Post by mfwilkie on Mar 6, 2008 16:05:45 GMT -5
Goor piece, but not really a monostitch, Rick.
I left you two links to check out in a response to your review of
In the Garden at Giverny.
Maggie
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Smitten
Mar 6, 2008 16:21:28 GMT -5
Post by wavemaker9 (Rick D.) on Mar 6, 2008 16:21:28 GMT -5
Tanks yous guys. I'll check out those links Ms Maggie.
R
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