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Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Apr 6, 2008 9:59:56 GMT -5
The Better Place
The breeze was emptied of despair by rains that sieved through lighted hours in damp, unsheltered air on drought-browned lawns and needy flowers.
The eulogies, sincerely spoken by kinfolk and a childhood friend (whose bonds are never broken even when lives and lovers end),
were rich in country lore, affection, and the low tones of real respect, resplendent with inflection and time-acquired intellect.
Goodbye, they said, in simple ways, belying the complexities of how one’s ending days are eased by knowing that disease
won’t follow when the soul is gone, the body cold and soon embalmed, but memories live on and most conflicted hearts are calmed
by knowing that it’s necessary to let the newly dead be dead, accepting that we bury only the things that should be shed.
What’s left is good; the recollections remain within the memory banks, a place of bright affections and, undeniably, our thanks.
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Post by MichaelFirewalker on Apr 6, 2008 12:42:35 GMT -5
this poetic wisdom applies to so many things in life, many kinds of change----it is great wisdom, David, and you have spoken it with precision and depth and the respect it deserves----the poem has an ease about it----it does not labor, or force----it simply allows, by letting us look at what we each must face, but without personal threat, for this is not our loved one who is dead, but someone we do not know----and then again, is that really so?----for are we not all the same in the end?----methinks this is what your poem really says, and that is great grace...
love and respect, michael
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Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Apr 6, 2008 12:50:37 GMT -5
Thank you, my friend. YOu hit the nail on the head. Watching my aunt buried yesterday was a mixture of relief and grief.
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Post by Jonathan Morey Weiss-Namaste47 on Apr 6, 2008 17:42:13 GMT -5
The penultimate stanza reveals the poet's wisdom. My feeling is you didn't write this in strict rhyme and meter, David, allowing for subtle metric alterations in order to fit the message rather than the beat.
Very well done-and I can relate...my wife's uncle was laid to rest after the quality of his life had deteriorated.
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Post by ramadevi on Apr 13, 2008 18:00:19 GMT -5
I absolutely agree with Michael and she has articulated my thoughts to perfectly that i am satisfied to just say ditto!
A perfect closing stanza for a piece of work rich with wisdom.
Prayers for your aunt to be at peace.
Warm regards, rama devi
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