antman
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Blessed are the peacemakers: for they shall be called the children of God.
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Post by antman on Dec 26, 2007 20:53:56 GMT -5
I can’t stop throwing up!
I’ve tossed up heavens and
galaxies galore,
clouds and mountains
like rolling shores!
If I don’t stop this upward
heave, who knows what‘s
next for mine eyes to believe?
Balloons and Space stations
that orbit so near,
possibly twelve leaping,
flying reindeer.
Christmas has this tummy
in distress, as I upchuck
egg nog then clean
its soggy mess.
Ah, hick-up
have a
"Happy New Year"
every-body!
Peace, and goodwill
to all.
antman
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Post by MichaelFirewalker on Dec 27, 2007 18:04:41 GMT -5
well, this was fun, I hope...it's really great to hear from you, but now you have me all worried that you are sick or something, as this poem is just too darned real!----it's very well written, Anthony, but a wee bit disturbin' too...
love ya,
michael
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antman
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Blessed are the peacemakers: for they shall be called the children of God.
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Post by antman on Dec 27, 2007 19:23:11 GMT -5
Yes, it is my friend but "tis the season".
I'm fine but many I know, especially my son
who was over for Christmas felt bad and was
being brave about it. I was contemplating about
it all...
Sometimes we put ourselves there
through over indulgence.
A kind warning to all..have fun
but with moderation this Holiday.
love ya too!
anthony
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Post by Jonathan Morey Weiss-Namaste47 on Dec 27, 2007 19:50:55 GMT -5
Great title! I thought you were Rick for a sec.
First stanza reeled me in, Ant.
Like the subtle rhyming of "Christmas" and the assonance in S4
Small suggestion for S4-
"Christmas has this tummy
in distress, as I upchuck
egg nog then clean
its soggy mess."
Peace, good health, and bountiful blessings for the New Year.
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Post by Ron Wallace (Scotshawk) on Dec 28, 2007 18:19:47 GMT -5
Clever word play and good use of humor, Anthony. Unique subject for those with stomachs not so easily turned. LOL Good to read your stuff again, my friend. Ron
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antman
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Blessed are the peacemakers: for they shall be called the children of God.
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Post by antman on Dec 29, 2007 18:25:36 GMT -5
Thank you Jon and Ron,
I appreciate the nod on this little piece,
It's great to be back online after the long
wait to get my computer and inter-net
sewn back together (smile).
Thanks again Jon, I took your advice and
ran with it.
I really missed you all.
Peace and blessings to you both,
anthony
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