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Post by LeoVictorBriones (poetremains) on Dec 26, 2007 22:03:17 GMT -5
The silent clang of the clay bell, the dull murmur above a moss infested sea, the still darkness of a plum confessional, to hang neck high from a noose above the canyon of sculpted earth, to see from beyond the sultry spiral of clouds and dust a single green and lustrous blade of grass, to dip the poet into a silent, shiny, silver lake, to pull the new born from his embryonic sack and wrap his umbilical cord around the twisted, gnarled tree of life and bury the eldest son of all the earth in the tin casket of dogged death to be and see all that we could never see to live and love all that we could never love and still beg like a hollow cylinder to listen to life’s lonely wind and wish that we could be the poet chiseled to the granite tome of history.
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Post by sandpiper on Dec 28, 2007 10:20:35 GMT -5
"to pull the new born from his embryonic sack and wrap his umbilical cord around the twisted, gnarled tree of life and bury the eldest son of all the earth in the tin casket of dogged death"
ah, nicely done... over here trying to figure out how to make the "o" in Leo with a chisel...
-piper
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Post by aliciadon on Dec 28, 2007 13:48:38 GMT -5
Lovely, Leo. A sense of yearning reached out and drew me in. The colors were so effective, as were the images of empty bells and hollow cylinders, the longing to be filled, to discover, to draw forth. Great detail. Glad to have read this today. Lynne
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