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Dec 27, 2007 0:49:25 GMT -5
Post by wavemaker9 (Rick D.) on Dec 27, 2007 0:49:25 GMT -5
Light and airy
with no care we
sifted sand
on knee and hand
patting castles
and
chatting passels
important only
to lesser lonely
than two
with nothing other
to do
than that.
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antman
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Blessed are the peacemakers: for they shall be called the children of God.
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Dec 27, 2007 8:23:47 GMT -5
Post by antman on Dec 27, 2007 8:23:47 GMT -5
This fits the title to a tee, Rick.
Your opening line sets the tone and the rest
of the piece flows right along for
a nice and easy read.
anthony
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Dec 27, 2007 8:26:14 GMT -5
Post by Jonathan Morey Weiss-Namaste47 on Dec 27, 2007 8:26:14 GMT -5
Nice to read this, this morning. I wanna build sand castles........
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Dec 27, 2007 9:21:09 GMT -5
Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Dec 27, 2007 9:21:09 GMT -5
Great rhythm and content. Carries like a smooth ocean wave.
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Dec 28, 2007 10:05:07 GMT -5
Post by sandpiper on Dec 28, 2007 10:05:07 GMT -5
agree with above, love this....
easy and light...
-piper
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Dec 29, 2007 9:13:24 GMT -5
Post by ramadevi on Dec 29, 2007 9:13:24 GMT -5
Enjoyed!
Ditto all the above.
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Dec 29, 2007 16:39:34 GMT -5
Post by Ron Wallace (Scotshawk) on Dec 29, 2007 16:39:34 GMT -5
What can I say? It's just as smooth as it can be, not a bump nor a nit to pick. Ron
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