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Post by Jonathan Morey Weiss-Namaste47 on Dec 27, 2007 9:55:47 GMT -5
In the center sits the centaur
with his mentor, great inventor.
His intent, sir isn't denser
than the sensor coming hence, or
the dissenter on the fence-
the lone repenter's arrogance,
not innocence, is quite intense-
the quintessence of the lessons.
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Post by mfwilkie on Dec 27, 2007 10:12:22 GMT -5
I like this a lot, jon..
Mags
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Post by sandpiper on Dec 27, 2007 12:13:12 GMT -5
In the center sits the centaur
with his mentor, great inventor.
His intent, sir isn't denser
than the sensor coming hence, or
the dissenter on the fence-
the lone repenter's arrogance,
not innocence, is quite intense-
the quintessence of the lessons.
or
in adolescence not to lessen
the quintessence of his lesson.
very fun!
:-)
-piper
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Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Dec 27, 2007 13:57:41 GMT -5
Now that was rhythm.
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Post by MichaelFirewalker on Dec 27, 2007 17:24:01 GMT -5
you are such a lover, Jon...of every living thing...unconditionally accepting, affirming and patient,...gentle towards sameness and merciful towards difference, equally...able to see as God sees...and have a good laugh at yourself and at all of us at the same time...just like He does...
a grateful michael
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Post by Ron Wallace (Scotshawk) on Dec 28, 2007 18:09:40 GMT -5
Nicely done, Jon, just rolls and rolls. Ron
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Post by ramadevi on Dec 29, 2007 9:05:32 GMT -5
Love the laughing rhythm
the witty words frolicking
a celebration of assonance, consonance, resonance
cents and sense
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