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MichaelFirewalker EP Elite Club 2000 plus Posts: 3,164	Prana Jan 4, 2008 15:18:29 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by MichaelFirewalker on Jan 4, 2008 15:18:29 GMT -5 words are not a game but fountains of breath tamed- a white river’s path away from death
	Last Edit: Jan 5, 2008 15:39:43 GMT -5 by MichaelFirewalker fire talking truth and wisdom, fire bearing Love and healing----sacred fire, Christic fire, Michael's fire walking...

LeoVictorBriones (poetremains) Board Member I have always imagined that Paradise will be a kind of library. Borges Posts: 2,324	Prana Jan 4, 2008 19:10:38 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by LeoVictorBriones (poetremains) on Jan 4, 2008 19:10:38 GMT -5 Blessed are they who communicate, for they shall learn to love each other
	If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other. Mother Teresa

Jo Lynn Ehnes EP Elite Club 2000 plus An angel of romance to guide your dreams. Posts: 3,207	Prana Jan 4, 2008 21:49:50 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jo Lynn Ehnes on Jan 4, 2008 21:49:50 GMT -5 Very insightful. I love these strong, short pieces you are doing right now.
	aka Poetic Dawn, Dawn of Tomorrow Hungering for one ray of Light.

Ron Wallace (Scotshawk) Board Member "Are you sure Hank done it this a way?" Waylon Jennings Posts: 2,697	Prana Jan 5, 2008 0:45:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ron Wallace (Scotshawk) on Jan 5, 2008 0:45:43 GMT -5 Most excellent in every aspect of the work. It as an aesthetic appeal to eye, ear and heart. Outstanding. Ron
	"There will come a time when everything seems finished. This will be the beginning." Louis L'Amour

Jonathan Morey Weiss-Namaste47 Board Member We are a group of people, then poets, and finally friends. Posts: 3,944	Prana Jan 5, 2008 10:26:50 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jonathan Morey Weiss-Namaste47 on Jan 5, 2008 10:26:50 GMT -5 Words as "fountains of breath is" a superlative image. I like the assononance and rhyme of "breath" "path" and"death" Pithy.
	"Through the door of meditation, the imprisoned Soul-Bird of Omnipresence was released. It spread its wings of joy and flew over infinite space, casting cool peace-shadows on unhappiness-scorched beings. Then the Bird of Heaven remembered its little cage of past habits, and folding its wings, lodged itself again behind the bars or earthliness......" Paramahansa Yogananda"

mfwilkie Admin SITE ADMIN[/b] Posts: 4,644	Prana Jan 5, 2008 10:32:38 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by mfwilkie on Jan 5, 2008 10:32:38 GMT -5 Excellent, Mick, just excellent. My only thought would be an m-dash after 'tamed' and drop the 'and'. It doesn't need it at all. Tight! Tight! Tight! Mags

Tina (Firefly) Board Member A person should hear a little music, read a little poetry, and see a fine picture every day.. Goethe Posts: 2,890	Prana Jan 16, 2008 17:33:41 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tina (Firefly) on Jan 16, 2008 17:33:41 GMT -5 Oh, Michael.. this is top notch! How very true this is, and how skillfully it is written. Wonderful, wonderful!! Tina
	The finest poetry may not always be written. but it is always felt.

MichaelFirewalker EP Elite Club 2000 plus Posts: 3,164	Prana Jan 17, 2008 15:56:07 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by MichaelFirewalker on Jan 17, 2008 15:56:07 GMT -5 Mags...okay! okay! okay! Tina...bunches o' blessings... michael
	fire talking truth and wisdom, fire bearing Love and healing----sacred fire, Christic fire, Michael's fire walking...