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Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Jan 7, 2008 13:16:41 GMT -5
Yes, poetic license is a fickle bitch, JS. I like this one.
David
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Post by sandpiper on Jan 7, 2008 15:40:31 GMT -5
I like this one too, and really like the idea of the words themselves being emotional.
Is the "to do" on purpose?
Very fun!
-piper
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Post by johnnysaturn on Jan 7, 2008 17:23:14 GMT -5
Piper
I'd love to be able claim this as a dazzling subversion of standard word order but it was actually a typo. Thanks for spotting and pleased you enjoyed.
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Post by Ron Wallace (Scotshawk) on Jan 11, 2008 18:52:02 GMT -5
The words as the children presented in a unique and original voice. I admit to smiling recalling my own mother's age old promise of what she'd do to me when we got home. Your words must've been good children; you treated them well I think. Ron
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