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Post by MichaelFirewalker on Jan 11, 2008 16:11:50 GMT -5
the blood rose
binds difference
unfolds pain
as fragrance
oozing slow
violence
into infinite
gain
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Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Jan 11, 2008 16:59:11 GMT -5
Love it, Michael, but I do have a suggestion.
How about "oozing slow" instead of "moving"?
Just a thought.
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Post by MichaelFirewalker on Jan 11, 2008 20:35:06 GMT -5
oooooo......oooooozing is soooo much more gooooooey!Love it...
thanks,
michael
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