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Post by mfwilkie on Apr 13, 2008 17:07:59 GMT -5
Look at these words as they fall from the mouth of a muse who's dancing to Trevor Immelman's drive towards the green in Augusta. I think she sleeps with the theories of Pope leaching from her iPod. (The pain in my ass.) I wish she'd free me to limp with Lorca, with Wright and that sparrow. With Walt. Free my struggle with two left feet.
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Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Apr 14, 2008 9:08:58 GMT -5
I think it's you've spelled them golfer's name wrong, Mags, but I'm not certain. Nicely done. Find that rhythm, babe.
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Post by ramadevi on Apr 14, 2008 13:54:57 GMT -5
I also enjoyed the rhythm! nice job!
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Post by mfwilkie on Apr 15, 2008 0:08:07 GMT -5
Thanks, rama.
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Post by Nan on Apr 16, 2008 19:33:22 GMT -5
Maggie, I thnk your muse freed you long enough to wirte this poem of eloquence I enjoyed it.
Nan
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