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Post by Jo Lynn Ehnes on Apr 17, 2008 21:02:20 GMT -5
Longing for that sensual kind of art;
a nude with body language on display.
To feel erotic quivers slowly drawn
by strokes that warm the flesh of inner thighs,
creating searing brands from burning fires
that dance upon a strong, determined tongue…
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Post by Sherry Thrasher on Apr 18, 2008 14:27:10 GMT -5
i'd comment but i am racing for a cold shower...
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Post by pelos on Apr 18, 2008 18:01:04 GMT -5
A wee bit warm in here all of sudden me thinks, oh yes me thinks - just a thought but
may you think of this -
Longing for the sensual kind of art;
nude with body language on display.
To feel erotic quivers slowly drawn
by strokes that warms flesh of inner thighs,
searing brands of burning fires
dance upon a strong, determined tongue…
as I say just thoughts - either way - what erotic plyfulness written so well - pelos
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Post by mfwilkie on Apr 19, 2008 1:32:18 GMT -5
JL,
Been reading this over the last few days, and have a thought—
what if you started this by saying:
WANTED: Tatoo artist with a determined tongue
strong and determined imply the same thing, I would think.
Then go on to describe the desire in terms of branding invisible but lingering strokes of art on the body.
Maggie
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