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Post by wavemaker9 (Rick D.) on May 10, 2008 0:32:08 GMT -5
Tell me your troubles and I will listen for no reason.
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Post by mfwilkie on May 11, 2008 9:14:40 GMT -5
Because title and meter are important considerations when composing a monostich, Rick, think about trying it this way:
Objective:
to listen to your troubles without reason.
Maggie
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Post by David Nelson Bradsher on May 11, 2008 11:04:45 GMT -5
Mags-
I'm not sure of the intent of your suggestion here.
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Post by wavemaker9 (Rick D.) on May 11, 2008 12:45:48 GMT -5
There are two basic meanings to objective and two basic to no reason. Both are answers.
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Post by ramadevi on May 11, 2008 13:27:21 GMT -5
I like it as it is...for no reason! LOL
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Post by mfwilkie on May 12, 2008 10:58:54 GMT -5
Oops! I edited in 'without' for no reason. Sorry, Rick.
Objective:
to listen to your troubles for no reason.
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