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Post by LynnDoiron on May 19, 2008 15:29:28 GMT -5
Today William Stafford’s many stones made a marker under the skylight, one of those stacks of relatively flat rocks that say:
Some- one was here & placed us just so for reasons we don’t understand.
For reasons I don’t understand the word for that rock pile skips over my tongue, hits the back of my throat, lifts again to nick along my molars, but refuses (even silently in letters soft-leaded on the page) to form. It is a hierarchy of rocks, smallest on top, largest footprint on the bottom, more in the middle space.
I know you can see what I cannot find. I will blame this lapse of easy-word catching on the ceiling fan, not on the sun or the earth or the sky turned down like an ironware bowl glazed blue and fired with runnels in tact. Not on a dead poet’s crows or stones. It is all
a balancing act – the remembered, what is not, the naming of acts, after effects, how soon one topples, or stands.
Is it enough that I know there is a word for such a marker stacked out of stones? After all, it’s not the compilation I admire in the end, but the elements, stone by stone that cause my heart to cave in.
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[after reading three Stafford poems: “Things That Happen Where There Aren’t Any People”, “The Early Ones”, and “Notice What This Poem is Not Doing” from Contemporary American Poetry, Fifth Edition]
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Post by purplejacket on May 19, 2008 19:26:15 GMT -5
I am loving these model poems of yours. When my husband can't think of the name for something, he invariably calls it whatever word first comes to mind. This word is often swizzlestick. "Amanda, have you seen my... er... swizzlestick?"
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Post by Sherry Thrasher on May 19, 2008 22:29:08 GMT -5
Made it through my first day of class so all is well. Seems that we will be doing some of these poems written after poems.
You make these look easy but I know that is simply your skill.
My faves are the blue earthenware bowl and the word catching on the ceiling fan. Sorry, I'm poetry brain dead and have nothing intelligent to offer except to say that as always this is another great work.
BTW, I almost fainted when my professor said that we will not be writing any poetry with end rhyme... Also, no Victorian poetry or sonnets.. . What shall I do?
Sherry
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Post by LynnDoiron on May 19, 2008 23:25:53 GMT -5
Honest to Pete, first thing this morning when I looked at my calendar next to my bed and noted the 19th as the date, I thought of you -- first day of school! and wondered if michael pinned a little envelope to your blouse or jumper with milk money inside and a note as to what bus you should ride .... Been thinking of you off and on all day. Keep us all up on what class is like, your assingments and so forth ... I AM so EXcited FOR you. I love school [in case you couldn't tell!]
and pj!!! how big my smile was to read your response -- EggsACTly! That's what they call those rock piles ----> swizzlesticks! [honest, the word still hasn't come to me, and I'm kind of glad because now I can call it that .... You so funny.]
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Post by Tina (Firefly) on May 21, 2008 10:06:59 GMT -5
We've always said "spaghetti" for that word that won't come to mind. But I like "swizzlestick" and may change to that now. As for your poem, I wish I was expert poet enough to dig out anything that I felt didn't fit perfectly. But, no, this is another terrific piece from you Lynnie. Cairn, I believe, is the word you may be searching for. I saw lots of these in Nova Scotia. That may not be the right spelling though. Tina
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