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Post by wavemaker9 (Rick D.) on May 28, 2008 0:50:19 GMT -5
The only true constant willingly
apparent to man is his need to
recognize that his logic of order
will perpetually challenge
random events of matter in
his ever expanding youniverse.
With admission he will know
his speed of light slowed
after the first light showed
and he must now listen
above his own noise
to see his origin
is not the center
of all.
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Post by LeoVictorBriones (poetremains) on May 28, 2008 19:03:30 GMT -5
Rick... Heres to not taking ourselves to seriously... my only bump is with...big light
show...seems to slow he flow.
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Post by storyweaver on May 28, 2008 20:08:43 GMT -5
Rick,
I have to confess, I read this poem incorrectly and laughed like a loon as I realized, an instant after the read, my mistake. I then decided I had to share my blooper: my mind apparently decided that the word 'origin' should be 'organ.' So, you see I had a great laugh because it worked very well! LOL
Beyond my idiot ramblings I like this poem (even when read properly.) I do agree with Leo about the 'big light' line. It does bump the read. Perhaps another simple image there-- 'big bang' would work. I know that the title already implies the big bang theory, but I think it is the use of the word 'light' twice that creates the pause for me.
Nice one!
Gina
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Post by wavemaker9 (Rick D.) on May 28, 2008 20:35:49 GMT -5
Thank you Leo and Gina. I think you are both correct. The big light show is the big bang but it was a play on words that doesn''t seem to work. Before the big bang, matter was too dense for light to escape, so the big light "show" had 2 meanings that apparently do escape the reader. Needs work. I agree.
Rick
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Post by LynnDoiron on May 29, 2008 18:33:50 GMT -5
good. grinning here. you bring that out in me. and i thank you.
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Post by wavemaker9 (Rick D.) on May 29, 2008 19:53:09 GMT -5
The horizon problem is truely an unsolved puzzle to cosmologists and this statement reveals a heretical solution to the puzzle... That light speed is not a constant or the initial burst of light was faster during the big bang event and slowed instantaneously after. The scope is so large, 13 billion years, that mans development and his vision are not evolved enough to set universal constants other than those that work for him. EMc2 is only a theory and works, as it reveals, within the parameters of our living environment.
Every word in this write explains scientific theory (not youniverse) but when simplified, reveals our limits.
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