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Post by mfwilkie on Jun 2, 2008 1:14:01 GMT -5
My feet want to move up the slope
of challenge, Sister Stone; my ass
is getting antsy on this seat.
Anywhere strange will feel like home
if the bourbon's three-fingers neat.
or
Anywhere that is strange will feel
like home if the beer is stacked
three-bottles deep.
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Post by LynnDoiron on Jun 2, 2008 12:17:43 GMT -5
bourbon, eh?
i'm still sticking with the milk.
great little write, mugs. you are having fun. . what is ireland like in august? how's the fishing there? or Prague?
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Post by mfwilkie on Jun 2, 2008 13:07:17 GMT -5
Ah, but how about beer?
I added another ending to consider that I like better.
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Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Jun 2, 2008 13:34:31 GMT -5
Keep the bourbon, Mags, over the hops and barley.
Nice, very nice.
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Post by LynnDoiron on Jun 2, 2008 16:12:31 GMT -5
Have to say I prefer the bourbon, too. And, I like better without "that is" -- prefer the earlier straight shot for "strange" -- -- -- with beer, it's gotta be more than three deep and it's gotta be coldCOLD, sweaty bottled, named or slow-poured ... keep the bourbon, and neat, works great for this one, miss antsy ass.
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Post by brianedwards on Jun 2, 2008 23:58:56 GMT -5
Hi Maggie
I loved this - a fun little read.
I agree with above comments re beer/bourbon.
If beer, how about:
Anywhere strange will feel like home
if the beer's ice-cold and kept within reach.
B.
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Post by Sherry Thrasher on Jun 3, 2008 8:40:21 GMT -5
Hi, Magpie. How about:
with bourbon's poured three fingers neat
Hmmm...pondering.
Sherry
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