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Post by abrahamsurefoot on Jun 8, 2008 8:18:06 GMT -5
Carrying our daughter you looked (I teased) like Humpty Dumpty your normal catwalk glide transformed into a circus waddle.
To me it seemed as if you were in constant danger of capsizing.
These days, your poise might be more readily taken for abstractedness. And meanwhile, Beatrice is somewhere deep in the Rain Forest: busy saving the world runs my well-tried coda.
It occurs to me how unforeseeable are the gullies a child carves, how the cascading aftermaths are so often formed of silence.
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Post by Jonathan Morey Weiss-Namaste47 on Jun 8, 2008 16:37:20 GMT -5
Enjoyed the double entendred title. Is the colon in verse 3 really a representation of a musical coda? Very clever if so. We never know what's around the next bend, do we? Nicely written.........
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