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Post by mfwilkie on Apr 10, 2010 12:02:59 GMT -5
James,
Throw all the 'speculation' about his life out.
Start over. Write a creative epitaph with a more interesting opening like:
My favorite poet lies beneath a headstone that proclaims: 'I lived my life with no belief in end-game flames'
Don't write a list of his sins, the epitaph can do the set-up work; N can only speculate.
Re-think intent here.
Maggie
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