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Post by MichaelFirewalker on Feb 1, 2008 18:11:55 GMT -5
that woman over there
is the dangerous kind
looks so gentle
sounds so wise
feels as easy on the mind
as she’d like to be
on your eyes
but her
you’d best forget
‘cause what
you think you see
ain’t hardly ever
what you get
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Post by sandpiper on Feb 2, 2008 9:23:59 GMT -5
reminds me of going to the strawberries, picking out the plumpest, most-colorful, juiciest looking one there only to turn it over an inch from my mouth to see the half-rotten underside.
I like the lightness of this one, with the advice.
I'm not sure I love the title. I think maybe "beware the sweet" or something a little less telling might work more in your favor.
-piper
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Post by MichaelFirewalker on Feb 2, 2008 15:35:18 GMT -5
okay, piper, I shall think on that----am doing others along this same line, also with sweet in the title----good food for nutritious contemplation...
thanks,
michael
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Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Feb 2, 2008 16:17:48 GMT -5
Amen, sister. Not a nit, or a berry, to pick.  |
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Post by MichaelFirewalker on Feb 2, 2008 17:34:11 GMT -5
thank you, David----how is it we can find so much truth in something so sad?
michael
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Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Feb 2, 2008 17:42:47 GMT -5
Es la vida, hermana.  |
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Post by johnnysaturn on Feb 3, 2008 6:30:45 GMT -5
A refulgent little nugget hewn from bitter experience. But will they listen?
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Post by Jo Lynn Ehnes on Feb 3, 2008 8:41:00 GMT -5
Michael are you writing about me again? Nah.. sweet on the outside....sweeter on the inside
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Post by wavemaker9 (Rick D.) on Feb 3, 2008 13:26:48 GMT -5
aiin dat da truph! But licking off the candy shell can be so much fun! You know?
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Post by MichaelFirewalker on Feb 3, 2008 16:17:17 GMT -5
David...yes, it is, and every day I grieve at it...
JL!----you is jezzz sugah, chil', an' nuttin' else at all, 'ceptin' mebbe all dat spice...
Rick----oh, yeah....
hugs,
michael
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