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Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Feb 3, 2008 7:33:32 GMT -5
Good economy with a wallop, Johnny.
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Post by mfwilkie on Feb 3, 2008 10:41:32 GMT -5
Just a thought, johnny.
what the world
shake hands with
is an anagram of you—
a game of consequences
that leads absolutely
nowhere
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Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Feb 3, 2008 11:14:30 GMT -5
Good suggestion, Maggie.
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Post by Jonathan Morey Weiss-Namaste47 on Feb 3, 2008 15:27:59 GMT -5
I like Maggie's suggestion also. Don't you want "shakes"?
Interesting piece.
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Post by MichaelFirewalker on Feb 3, 2008 16:26:35 GMT -5
yes, my friend,
I truly understand
how very bad and sad
are those what's and who's
who did or now do
unto you
michael
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Post by Ron Wallace (Scotshawk) on Feb 5, 2008 0:32:44 GMT -5
Solid, I really like it well enough both ways. If it was mine, I probably couldn't make the call. Excellent voice and tone in its brevity. Ron
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