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Post by mfwilkie on Dec 7, 2008 16:35:59 GMT -5
A peripatetic heart requires two pairs of shoes, both of them red, both of them dangerous; two hats that can option feathers on a whim, and two dresses: one red silk plunged to interest the roving eyes of a Spanish lyricist, and the other, your basic black, shoulder-capped, tea-length number able to carry off Sunday morning's guilt.
Though none of these disguises will be necessary once the nakedness of said heart hits the west coast of Ireland and wraps itself in Basho's idea of the familiar.
*Robert Penn Warren: Tell me a story of deep delight from the end of Audubon: A Vision
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Post by Jonathan Morey Weiss-Namaste47 on Dec 7, 2008 18:10:40 GMT -5
Great job, Maggie...........super logical.......
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Post by PantheUs on Dec 9, 2008 2:06:05 GMT -5
alot of twins floating around tha city
i enjoyed this piece - read it again with a smile
after the end i didnt want go right away
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Post by Ron Wallace (Scotshawk) on Dec 31, 2008 11:27:49 GMT -5
I like it, can't find a nit to pick, but you know I'm terrible at that anyway. Still it needs more reads before easing off the front page. Ron
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Post by alfredo on Dec 31, 2008 20:23:21 GMT -5
your best for a while me thinks
prefer “nomadic heart” with its desert ring thing even thought the destination is that heathen nation
(not serious)
OK OK on the tiles at/within the emerald isles
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Post by mfwilkie on Jan 8, 2009 23:29:11 GMT -5
Thanks for the read, all. Needs a wee drop of revision, me thinks.
Maggie
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Post by Timothy Juhl on Jan 9, 2009 0:59:16 GMT -5
Hey Maggie,
I'm completely taken by two hearts, both of them dangerous, although the reference to 'your basic black', places the reader in the poem, rather unintentionally, I think. And Basho takes me away from Ireland in the end.
Tim
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Post by Tina (Firefly) on Jan 9, 2009 9:48:01 GMT -5
One of my top all=time favorites of yours, Mags.
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