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Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Dec 24, 2008 1:18:18 GMT -5
Must Wash Hands
In the bathroom of a Burger King, he’s trying out the Pontius Pilate bit of washing off the fault for anything that might suggest he caused their public snit.
It happened fast, too fast for him to stop her when all he asked was just a simple question— “Would you prefer grilled chicken or a Whopper?” followed up with the benign suggestion
that her complaints about some extra pounds might be directly linked to what she ate. Through clenching teeth, she said, “That may be grounds for murder, to critique a woman’s weight.”
As if on cue, all patrons edged away like children circling round a school yard fight, watching a bully tease a hapless prey with setup lefts before a roundhouse right.
The jabs were verbal, tentative and weak, nothing like the slap she aimed and landed across the pinkness of his puffy cheek with a wintry palm, unhinged and open-handed.
Through the crowd, he walked—no, he retreated to stand there shaking, claiming innocence as he attempts to get the soap that's needed from a dispenser that will not dispense.
David Nelson Bradsher
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Post by wavemaker9 (Rick D.) on Dec 24, 2008 2:10:25 GMT -5
Man who offer Whopper may get Big Smack. Dave, you do it with such practiced poetic discipline though. Rick
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Post by mfwilkie on Dec 26, 2008 10:21:39 GMT -5
followed up with the benign suggestion - 9? Since you used A's, can you have a feminine ending on the 9th S leading into the next line, muh cara?
Mags
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