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Post by dmtimney on Mar 15, 2009 8:23:33 GMT -5
I smiled this morning when I read the words you'd plucked from Rilke's garden, brushed sugar and selfishness aside and placed them in my finest vase slightly left of center on the kitchen mantle.
I'm inside out today, a small fish uneasy in the muffle of watered downed silence. I ignore the phone, the church bell, the neighbor's dog barking in the street, everything but a heckle that whispers in two languages, "Yo la deseo aquĆ.".
So I slip on the woolly itch of an oversized red coat that warms me to the palms of my second life, escape to the seawall where we rested the car on the late October afternoon when we chased that rainbow from Ayer to Portsmouth, where you introduced me to the virtues of Tripoli's pizza and the tide that would carry me to the New World.
It was never a thought to deny you the waves of the asphalt between here and Jerusalem. Oliver told me you had to go.
I simply couldn't stand one more good-bye.
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Post by Jonathan Morey Weiss-Namaste47 on Mar 15, 2009 10:10:00 GMT -5
Good title.......many visually intelligent lines, poignancy resplendent within them.
neighbors dog in S2 needs an apostrophe.
Enjoyed "the woolly itch of an oversized red coat............."
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Post by dmtimney on Mar 15, 2009 10:21:24 GMT -5
pesky apostrophe
Thanks, Jon
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Post by mfwilkie on Mar 16, 2009 0:54:14 GMT -5
Muchas gracias, mi amiga!!!
I'm so glad the red coat is keeping you warm.
Give my love to the boy-chick. Tell him I'm still counting the days until our favorite next book comes out and I hope he's doing well in school.
Talk to you soon. Much to discuss.
Mag
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Post by Ron Buck (halfshell) on May 17, 2009 9:53:52 GMT -5
sweet and just left of center!
tipping my cap
ron
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