alfredo
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Feb 10, 2008 21:03:27 GMT -5
Post by alfredo on Feb 10, 2008 21:03:27 GMT -5
“Don' t need bait”, she said. Took her fishin’ Persistent miss. Insistent kiss. Caught nothin’ ‘cept’n’
bliss
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Feb 10, 2008 21:12:56 GMT -5
Post by MichaelFirewalker on Feb 10, 2008 21:12:56 GMT -5
quite pleasant...like the bounce it has, and the joyfulness of its language----you have a fine sense of whimsy, alfredo...
michael
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alfredo
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Feb 10, 2008 21:24:40 GMT -5
Post by alfredo on Feb 10, 2008 21:24:40 GMT -5
You' re just saying that because its true!
Stand by for some serious/dismal stuff ..Rippling Shadows
(also, I will publish Abstract Iraqi Extract...as u suggested.)
thanks for taking the time....
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Feb 11, 2008 9:14:47 GMT -5
Post by Jonathan Morey Weiss-Namaste47 on Feb 11, 2008 9:14:47 GMT -5
Cute, Alfredo.. Either "don't need bait" or No need for bait" might be clearer. Pretty good catch if you ask me........
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alfredo
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Feb 11, 2008 18:11:52 GMT -5
Post by alfredo on Feb 11, 2008 18:11:52 GMT -5
Thanks Jon', the die is cast (his fate) of course, in the first line.
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