Ron Buck (halfshell)
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Post by Ron Buck (halfshell) on May 17, 2009 8:14:40 GMT -5
Just around the bend .
I tip my cap to the lull-lolly phrasing; the push-and-shove body rising slowly.
The hum and hiss of before and after turns the half of an emptied shell over; as I bend to snatch it up, I think better of it.
I listen to the sun breaking under foam where my feet leave nothing sustained; the gulls are painting the sky again blue.
Lull-lolly, lull-lolly, lull-lolly, where my toes webbed under the big-top slap-slap the calliope-tongued breeze.
Along the walls of sleeping boulders old songs unwind, unite, cascade; the fenny grasses rub long legs and whisper to one another reed awakenings.
The ancient horseshoe drifts in on the tide to release a millennium mixture of egged spawn and silently moans beneath mudrusty silt-clouds as sandpipers rapidly tiptoe after up-and-down; beak-beaking.
Lull-lolly, lull-lolly, lull-lolly.
At Drummer’s Cove the blackened bark and twisted branch of gaunt salt-flecked pines bear witness to a coven of stranded blackfish, rasping their last bent notes through squelched blowholes.
And the molded stream of four rubber wheeled travelers, honk-honk atop the worn asphalt channel, rotating their heads for a moment then move endlessly forward finally arriving to unpack and relax.
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Ron Buck (halfshell)
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EP Word Master and Published Member
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Post by Ron Buck (halfshell) on May 20, 2009 6:45:17 GMT -5
I had a thought and decided to expand the original 11 or so lines.
tidings ron
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Post by mfwilkie on May 23, 2009 1:10:12 GMT -5
Thinking about this, Ron.
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Post by Ron Wallace (Scotshawk) on May 27, 2009 11:05:02 GMT -5
Often I notice the sounds of your work, the rhythmic flow of images that help place me there. There's something relaxing in this concoction of sights and sounds. I like it, need a time or two through it again, but for now I find it very satisfying as it is. Ron
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