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Post by mfwilkie on May 27, 2009 14:51:05 GMT -5
Observations of Sunlight in Simultaneous Realities
Mine, an early afternoon of delicate, Mexican heat while yours was sliding off the wall behind you— behind our similar foreign accents— behind an artful dissection of thoughts— behind the spark you mentioned.
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Post by Marion Poirier on May 27, 2009 15:26:42 GMT -5
Maggie, here's an idea for a two-line haiku or it could be combined into one line. M
my day of delicate Mexican heat- yours sliding off the back wall
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Post by mfwilkie on May 27, 2009 16:00:51 GMT -5
Great idea, M!!
Thanks for the thought.
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