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Post by wavemaker9 (Rick D.) on Jun 9, 2009 0:37:58 GMT -5
I digress.
It isn’t as easy now
as when I dared
to see now
as then I cared
to look at now
as when I shared
you with who I am,
but I die less.
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Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Jun 9, 2009 6:59:16 GMT -5
Simply stated, but with a whallup, Rick. My compliments.
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Post by ramadevi on Jun 9, 2009 7:55:52 GMT -5
HI Rick, This reads like A SPIRAL and i am still spinning. You never fail to make me smile.  |
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alfredo
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Post by alfredo on Jun 9, 2009 15:20:33 GMT -5
Great impact this one …I like it . The site has drawn new breath
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Post by Jonathan Morey Weiss-Namaste47 on Jun 9, 2009 19:56:03 GMT -5
Nice package, Rick.........like the rhyme.
Am I in error in thinking that the last 3 lines should read:
"as when I shared
with you who I am,
but I die less."
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zambatriste
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Does this mean you liked the meatloaf?
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Post by zambatriste on Jul 20, 2009 12:18:31 GMT -5
Oh, no! It must be read exactly as it is written!
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Post by Tina (Firefly) on Jul 20, 2009 20:31:17 GMT -5
This is just amazing...Bravo Rick...
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