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Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Jun 29, 2009 13:28:06 GMT -5
Diminishing Returns
The beach is wide now. Lots of sand remains before high tide arrives at Emerald Isle. I’ll walk for distance— yet another mile until my time reduces with the grains.
Plenty of room, I think, to venture on, to reach the point again, where sea meets sound, and find, once more, the space to move around until my time, and light, has come and gone.
But best laid plans will often fall apart when nature chooses to reverse its trends. In bringing late attempts to early ends, it gets what one might call an early start.
On my return, the point is gone. I’m caught before my time. It’s later than I thought.
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Post by Tina (Firefly) on Jun 29, 2009 14:48:37 GMT -5
reflection perfection!
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Post by Jarlsbane - Michael Ray Cotner on Aug 8, 2009 14:32:05 GMT -5
Very interesting sonnet on being caught in high tide... very allegorical to life in that we always think we have enough time to do the things we want but often find we tarried too long in distraction that time and life is now gone... great poem david, as always-- Jarls
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