How This October Begins

mfwilkie Admin SITE ADMIN[/b] Posts: 4,644	How This October Begins Oct 7, 2009 14:04:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by mfwilkie on Oct 7, 2009 14:04:11 GMT -5 Can you hear the chill, feel the sounds of sudden darkness pushing to get in at the windows? The/That taste on your tongue is change.

ramadevi EP Gold 1500 Posts Plus Posts: 1,921	How This October Begins Oct 8, 2009 9:23:36 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ramadevi on Oct 8, 2009 9:23:36 GMT -5 Love the brevity. Stumbled on The/That I would delete the 'THE" and keep THAT. Nice one, Mags.

mfwilkie Admin SITE ADMIN[/b] Posts: 4,644	How This October Begins Oct 9, 2009 12:49:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by mfwilkie on Oct 9, 2009 12:49:48 GMT -5 Going with 'That', rama. Wasn't sure when I wrote it which I'd use. Thanks for the look-see. Mags