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senryu
Oct 8, 2009 7:02:06 GMT -5
Post by ramadevi on Oct 8, 2009 7:02:06 GMT -5
water's obvious
but fish cannot describe it
truth has no edges
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senryu
Oct 9, 2009 11:22:37 GMT -5
Post by Jonathan Morey Weiss-Namaste47 on Oct 9, 2009 11:22:37 GMT -5
Ahh yes, rama...........miss you.
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senryu
Oct 9, 2009 12:00:47 GMT -5
Post by ramadevi on Oct 9, 2009 12:00:47 GMT -5
Thanks John.  |
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senryu
Oct 9, 2009 12:27:39 GMT -5
Post by mfwilkie on Oct 9, 2009 12:27:39 GMT -5
rama,
what about:
truth has no egdes
like water to fish
the benefits are obvious
Maggie
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senryu
Oct 10, 2009 4:41:29 GMT -5
Post by ramadevi on Oct 10, 2009 4:41:29 GMT -5
I like it a lot Mags, but it is no longer senryu the way you wrote it, is it?
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senryu
Oct 17, 2009 13:18:33 GMT -5
Post by mfwilkie on Oct 17, 2009 13:18:33 GMT -5
Are you going by the 5/7/5 count, rama?
water's obvious
fish cannot describe it—
truth is edgeless
or
like truth-edgeless
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