Grand Design

[Jonathan Morey Weiss-Namaste47]

All is as it should be.

Order without structure
encompasses all;
deep blues, kangaroos,
oak beams, morning dew,
cool breezes in summer.

My eyes see a boundless sky.
Ears are intimate with silence.
My hands relax as the pen
writes without them.

I smell the ether in its ubiquity,
taste the word of God, then
swallow beatitude.

All is as it should be.

[ramadevi]

Lovely work, dear friend.

Loved this

Ears are intimate with silence.
My hands relax as the pen
writes without them.

and

I smell the ether in its ubiquity,
taste the word of God, then
swallow beatitude.


Whoeee!

[mfwilkie]

Nice, jon!

Back later after some thinkin'.

Maggie

[David Nelson Bradsher]

Mags, that's beautifully done. No nits at first read, but I'll be back.

[mfwilkie]

This is jon's poem, D, and what a great opening stanza, jon!!!

I'm wondering if you might look at reducing the pronouns in the 2 and 3S's
and combining them for a stronger stanza much like the V in the 1S, jon.
Something hat reads more fluid.

Maggie