The No-Name Draft

[mfwilkie]

It could be late last autumn, those days
when envelopes of cold-edged warmth
remind us that the season's changing.

There's nothing like it on your skin, and how
sublimnally it serves the mind.

Spring's coming runs in similar fashion;
pockets of melted air between the ice
that won't let go. Teasers.

How it excites us to have once again
survived the cold restrictiveness of winter,
the silence that lives in shadowy corners,
to face a sky-eye warming/rising to our needs,

all barriers withdrawn save one: ourselves.



can'take up my mind on this last line.

the 'a' sounds in the one above, or
the r's in this one.

All barriers removed save one: ourselves.

[Jo Lynn Ehnes]

wow, I love this Maggie. I like the withdrawn but I'm sure you may have gone the other direction by now. Hope all is well in your world.

[mfwilkie]

Glad you like this JL. Haven't revised as of yet.

Mags