Me, Myself, And I

[Angel Clementine]

Me, Myself, And I

by Angel Clementine


It's Me, Myself, and I, We three;
what follows are the facts:
proud Me has photos hanging arms
'round I's and Myself's backs.

Less vertical than I is Me,
less wide than Myself's name;
when I incites to anger, crowds,
it's Me who gets the blame.

Just picture, please, a chorus line,
Me's hands on Myself's back;
Me's heels are touching I's big toes,
they're singing, "Plumber's Crack".

Sometimes they're nuts, sometimes they're straight;
they laugh until they cry.
D' ever breathe an endless dream
with Me, Myself, and I?

[GD Martin]

At first glance, I thought this was a nonsense poem; however, on my third and final read, and knowing YOU, I realized that your ,"Me, Myself, and I" personage was merely a balanced force (by my definition). Have I even ever "breathed an endless dream?"-perhaps. I'm probably doing it right now. GD

[mfwilkie]

It's an interesting piece, Angel, and tough on the tongue, but fun, too.



It's Me, Myself, and I. We/ All three!
I think that no one lacks;
What follows are the facts:
proud Me has photos hanging arms
'round I's and Myself's backs;

Less vertical than I is Me,
less wide than Myself's name;
when I incites a angry restless crowd,*
it's Me who gets the blame.

Just picture, please, a chorus line,
Me's hands on Myself's back;
Me's heels are touching I's big toes,
Their singing, "Plumber's Crack".

Sometimes they're nuts, but sometimes they're straight;
they laugh until they cry.
'You ever breathe an endless dream
with Me, Myself, and I?

* Incite means stir up anger. the crowds already angry, Angel.

This is just a thought on this line for sound:

'You ever breathe an endless dream

D' ever breathe an endless dream

Nice.

Maggie

[Angel Clementine]

I sure appreciate your ideas, Maggie. I always feel thankful to have you read and offer your suggestions. Angel

[mfwilkie]

Any old time, Angel.

Maggie

[christopherholt]

really nice)) i love it)))

[Angel Clementine]

Nov 9, 2010 3:56:35 GMT -5 christopherholt said:

really nice)) i love it)))

Thank you, christopherholt.