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Feb 20, 2008 18:30:32 GMT -5
Post by MichaelFirewalker on Feb 20, 2008 18:30:32 GMT -5
ugly tree, alone, middling all that graceful, mannered
alpine grass; no cultivated forest would claim or touch
such a thrawn iconoclast; insect crusted branches gnash
at running skies; brash roots contort, masticate the dry
granite-gravelled ground.
its lust for all that’s wild draws frenetic winds; harsh
chaotic moans shriek berserk, strip brown bark skin
provide a sensate tree with most satisfying sin.
this aged mountain fir, twisted, worn, bloodied in its own
pitch dripped from wood cracked, ripped, rent by storm,
stood as time’s outcast, and will stand still, bent yet erect,
undeterred until the last.
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Feb 20, 2008 18:47:30 GMT -5
Post by johnnysaturn on Feb 20, 2008 18:47:30 GMT -5
Elemental my dear Watson. Epic feel to this. Vintage Firewalker.
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Feb 23, 2008 17:01:09 GMT -5
Post by MichaelFirewalker on Feb 23, 2008 17:01:09 GMT -5
vintage be where it's at, O thou endless fount of pearly wisdoms...
michael
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Feb 23, 2008 17:15:59 GMT -5
Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Feb 23, 2008 17:15:59 GMT -5
Love the intensity, Michael. Stark raving badness.  |
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Feb 23, 2008 17:48:36 GMT -5
Post by Jo Lynn Ehnes on Feb 23, 2008 17:48:36 GMT -5
Damn, Michael, that is so deep, I'm loving it
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Feb 23, 2008 19:26:20 GMT -5
Post by alfredo on Feb 23, 2008 19:26:20 GMT -5
Love your frenetic phonetics..seriuosly
..its very very creative ...digging deep ART
I like the title and yet...
but of course cannot improve on it!
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