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Post by johnnysaturn on Feb 21, 2008 12:22:33 GMT -5
Now you know why I usually stick to free verse.
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zambatriste
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Does this mean you liked the meatloaf?
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Post by zambatriste on Feb 21, 2008 13:03:10 GMT -5
But you did well!! I enjoyed it immensely! I always enjoy a breakfast of eggs served up with chromosomes. Manja!
z.
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Post by MichaelFirewalker on Feb 21, 2008 15:19:28 GMT -5
agree with zambatriste----it's another kick-in-the-ass!----good aim, John...
michael
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Post by Ron Wallace (Scotshawk) on Feb 23, 2008 12:30:17 GMT -5
Another much needed smile, and finely writ as well. Ron
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Post by mfwilkie on Feb 23, 2008 21:14:52 GMT -5
Some thoughts, John.
Emmet McComb,
was an ornery mister,
defied the elders
and married his dear sister
who later begat
a child with three legs
(had something to do
with chromosomes and eggs).
Smiling, here.
Maggie
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Post by LynnDoiron on Feb 24, 2008 0:59:50 GMT -5
Enjoyed and like some one above mentioned, smiles are good -- I owe you for this one.
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Post by johnnysaturn on Feb 24, 2008 8:06:48 GMT -5
Some thoughts, John. Emmet McComb, was an ornery mister, defied the elders and married his dear sister who later begata child with three legs (had something to do with chromosomes and eggs). Smiling, here. Maggie Liked most of those suggestions. Thanks Maggie. |
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Post by Jonathan Morey Weiss-Namaste47 on Feb 24, 2008 20:58:32 GMT -5
Nice tete a tete with you and Michael. For smoothness, I put forth:
Emmett McComb
was an ornery mister
defying the elders
he married his sister
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