Sweet Home Suite

[zambatriste]

Sweet Home Suite (AKA: Home Sweet Homey)

If home is where the heart is
And the heart knows no bound,
Doesn't it stand to reason
That home is all around?

Home is neither here nor there,
But both and all between it.
Home might be a foreign land
Although you've never seen it.

Or maybe home's a state of mind
And not a place at all;
It's all the dreams and other things
That hold the heart in thrall.


Just a morning communion with my muse......
Lara

[David Nelson Bradsher]

Nice, simple and efficient, with a nice flow. One thought, though, Z:

Home is neither here nor there,
But both and all between it.
Home might be a foreign land
Tho' you've never even seen it. (Although you've never seen it.)

[zambatriste]

Thank you, David. Yes, much better that. Change made.

Z

[alfredo]

liked it very much ...appeals to me directly and of course many others

consider :-

one you've never even seen"

[David Nelson Bradsher]

Afredo, that would snuff out the end rhyme. Because the companion line is "between it", she needs "seen it". Too bad, though, it would have been a good alternative.

[MichaelFirewalker]

I like its slick, tight, feminological sequencing...

michael