Limbo

[wavemaker9 (Rick D.)]

Is there reason
in this sleepless night
as distortions ply
for spatial concept of
big-little,
over-under,
in-out,
then-now,
and the right-right?
Is a fixation
on right
the wrong
state to assess
if anything is,
when no one
but me
agreed to
sleep on it.

Was I not awake
or dreaming I am?
Will I not know
my alarm?

[zambatriste]

Good morning Rick,

Being, myself, in that sort of nebulous, partially aware state as I'm reading this....I am enjoying that it means something different during each read-through. Right is, at first, moral right. After a few reads it becomes political right. Now, after reading,
"when no one
but me
agreed to
sleep on it"
.....I think you mean the right side of the bed.

I'm going back to sleep now......

Zzzzzz

[mfwilkie]

I keep coming back to this trying to figure out what's nippin' at my ear.

I'm thinking it's the word 'concept'. For some reason, and i can't explain it, I want to read:

for spatial definitions of

And the first question seems an unfinished thought to me, Rick, like 'for' should be part of the question.

Will I know my alarm? Might be an ending to consider.

Maggie