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Post by mfwilkie on Mar 7, 2008 1:08:53 GMT -5
The move will not be leaving much behind.
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Post by johnnysaturn on Mar 7, 2008 16:45:06 GMT -5
The counterpoint between the title and the line , the transition from outward to inward...lights up the possibilities inherent in this form.
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Post by MichaelFirewalker on Mar 7, 2008 18:01:05 GMT -5
this is very cool, Mags and John----wanna play with it awhile...
thanks!
michael
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Post by Jonathan Morey Weiss-Namaste47 on Mar 7, 2008 19:18:58 GMT -5
Nicely done, Maggie. I had to laugh when I thought of another use of behind. ;D
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Post by mfwilkie on Mar 7, 2008 23:31:51 GMT -5
You'd think these would be easy to write, but their not.
What I like about the challenge is how important the title is to
just one line,and the possibility of being able to accomplish a
succesful turn from where the reader thinks the title might be
taking him—then writing the line in meter.
This one came together in IP, but thank God for substitutions!!!
(Don't tell David I said that!)
Thanks for the read, guys.
Maggie
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Post by johnnysaturn on Mar 8, 2008 7:11:19 GMT -5
Nicely done, Maggie. I had to laugh when I thought of another use of behind. ;D You're a very naughty guy. But I might include the word "bottom" in my next poem as a special treat for you. |
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