Abstract Iraqi Extract

[alfredo]

Enter code 13
Click ID field
Type Service #
Click Dispatch Method
Select Baghdad body bag
Click Drop-down
Select Wooden box
Click on Rank
Select Sergeant-Marine
Click Composure
Select Serene
Click on Commiseration
Select “We regret.”
Click Free Text box
Type “From your son, sorry mum”
Click on Status
Select Deceased
Click Location
Select Iraq
Click backtrack
Click backtrack
Click backtrack
Press re-enter
Placenta
Press withdraw
Press extract
Press step back
Unborn, No soldier
What's more, no war!

[Jonathan Morey Weiss-Namaste47]

This hits hard, Alfredo, which I know was your intent. I remember a piece of yours with a similar MO. I like the rhyme, but questioned the purpose of "placenta."
Check typo in next to last line (soldier)

[pelos]

blatantly hard - I get the placenta and me thinks if you say withdrawn rather than
withdraw it will be more clear - if the boys weren't born they wouldn't have died
in what appears to be a senseless war. Love your drama. pelos