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Post by mfwilkie on Dec 15, 2007 2:35:47 GMT -5
Ten inches into Christmas Snow by Currier and Ives,
and eight minutes from the geriatric acrobatics of
fashioning a snow angel whose face had the texture
of an Irish knit cap.
The night sky is as white as my wings.
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Post by ramadevi on Dec 15, 2007 4:47:48 GMT -5
Brief and brilliant!
Your poem is also as white as the sky and wings.
Love the Irish-knit-cap snow-angel idea. Simply delicious.
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Post by Vasile Baghiu on Dec 15, 2007 5:20:43 GMT -5
Different things, mixed together in a short poem, all give the reader a meaning. I like it, Maggie!
Vasile
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Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Dec 15, 2007 9:47:09 GMT -5
Great depth and economy, Mags.
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Post by Sherry Thrasher on Dec 15, 2007 11:19:15 GMT -5
Perfect, Maggie. Sounds like a wonderful childlike experience. I'd love to see snow this year.
Sherry
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Post by MichaelFirewalker on Dec 15, 2007 15:07:39 GMT -5
you're on a roll, baby, the world is your pearl, and all your oysters Rockefeller on ice...
mick
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Post by Ken_Nye on Dec 16, 2007 10:42:48 GMT -5
I loved this one, Mag. You do create a plethora of images in just a splash of words.
Ken
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Post by sleepsw/bear(Rick Stansberger) on Dec 17, 2007 13:57:14 GMT -5
VERY nice!
Rick
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Post by Tina (Firefly) on Dec 17, 2007 23:35:27 GMT -5
I really enjoyed this. It's not easy to say so much or create such great images in so few words. But you did it here. Very very nice. Tina
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Post by sandpiper on Dec 20, 2007 17:16:46 GMT -5
I think this is just perfect...
-piper
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