Freeze Frame_ A Devens Pond/Revision

[mfwilkie]

signifying lines— dark brown to black bark—
pallet knife-lifts of blue, of shimmered gold,
a shift to another life, another park,
to a home become house become cold.

[LynnDoiron]

signifying lines: dark bark--brown to black--
pallette knife-lifts of a blue, of a shimmered gold;

shift to another life,
another park, a home
become a house
become cold.

mugs -- forgive my playing around a bit with this. you may be okay with pallet spelling, but you might wanna check it out; knif definitely needs that e; other stuff is just stuff from me.