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Post by mfwilkie on Dec 21, 2007 20:06:31 GMT -5
We’ve done this before- you read, I smoke and listen then have my way with the eccentricities of your ear.
At worst, we’re a curious film noire, opting for brass instead of strings to heighten our escape from the drape of a common protagonist, the mis-directed mind-fog fed for years with the skepticism we caved into in not acknowledging our otherness as poets.
Maybe it’s knowing the age and theory of words, the search for the purity in such sounds which has driven us to give in and reach for the survival of original minds separately, and together. We’re standing here, on the third floor of our lives, in dated underwear and monogrammed capes, taking an extreme chance with our dreams— yet, I have the sense our odd romance is more comedy and relief, more dogged perseverance and belief, worth more, and much harder to play than any form of make-believe.
Merry Christmas, you old fart!
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Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Dec 23, 2007 11:18:31 GMT -5
Merry Christmas back, mon ami. Thank you so much.
David
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Post by ramadevi on Dec 23, 2007 11:27:34 GMT -5
What a precious gift from one voice to another! Highly original!
These lines are particularly inventive:
we’re a curious film noire, opting for brass instead of strings to heighten our escape from the drape of a common protagonist
We’re standing here, on the third floor of our lives, in dated underwear and monogrammed capes, taking an extreme chance with our dreams
Love the closing too! the whole poem is a blast!
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Post by LynnDoiron on Jan 2, 2008 20:13:43 GMT -5
Maggie, this is gorgeous. Meant, of course, for the old fart -- but a gift to any and all who read it and who have ever had a friend read to them or have read to a friend in the night or daylight of creating . . . Gorgeous. Yes. I know I said it twice. Gorgeous to the nth.
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