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Post by wavemaker9 (Rick D.) on Jan 19, 2008 16:29:51 GMT -5
whatever
the only way to survive tomorrow is to look in the mirror today. the rearview. your compact. the reflective surface of your cell phone. your pots. doesn't matter. all you need is an eye. picture yourself naked if it helps. but own it. every delectable detestable morsel of youness. of youlessness. hold yourself against yourself and say the words that open and close every door "you are not enough but you are all i have". mean it. as you have never meant to hurt the ones you love. to leave the ones you needed more than they could fathom. say it for holding out. for giving too much too soon. for not forgiving. for the ones who made you feel a little less like the person you knew you are. for letting yourself believe yourself when you were better than the average lover. listener. tell yourself the one truth that ransoms all the lies. and then you can begin to despise what matters and that is the secret of change.
This girl can write! Her name is Cat and goes by various pen names. She currently writes at Bulldogpoetryworkshop.com as Round House Rita. and at Killpoets.com as Cat. I'm trying to get her here to stir up the pot.
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Post by mfwilkie on Jan 19, 2008 20:02:54 GMT -5
I like her poem, Rick.
Maggie
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Post by David Nelson Bradsher on Jan 20, 2008 12:06:19 GMT -5
The more the merrier.
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Post by Ron Wallace (Scotshawk) on Jan 20, 2008 21:16:04 GMT -5
Really nice bit of work; hope you can coax her this direction, Rick. I'd sure like to read more of her stuff if this any indicator. Ron
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Post by Vasile Baghiu on Jan 21, 2008 11:31:22 GMT -5
What a good poem, Rick! She is very talented, and I would like to see more of her work. Thanks for sharing the poem. Vasile
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